Review my notes on some readings from rhetoric of the Renaissance. What is abundant style, and in what ways is it relevant today in education and/or the workplace? Provide an example.
After reading Erasmus, Abundant Style to me means having the ability to express oneself in different ways based on our word choice so that we can enrich what we are saying. The notes from Wikipedia that Dr. Rice provided said that it was to "embellish, amplify, and give variety to speech and writing." So Abundant Style is basically putting Copia into practice. Erasmus talked about having list of words, definitions, metaphors, similes etc. ready at hand to use to express a sentence in different ways, while maintaining the original meaning. He said that some words hold more power or may be better suited for a situation and that is why it is important to be able to express things in various ways. Thus, we must have an abundant supply of these things. We all want our words and expressions to have meaning. No one wants to hear a lot of repetition or rambling. Erasmus said we should rely on expression and subject matter to guide our embellishments.
This is still very relevant today. It relates to Kairos, saying the right thing at the right place at the right time. Dependent on how we express our thoughts, may be the deciding factor of gaining a client, selling a car, creating an international partner, or even getting a job. We are constantly picking and choosing how we want to phrase something based on the context of the situation. Very quickly our brain has to decide how to express something by running through the options of vocabulary, metaphors, synonyms etc. we have stored over the years. The more well-read a person is, the more they have stored away and have to choose from.
Example:
The girl got a hair cut.
The oldest girl of the family, still very much young at heart, went to the salon to try a new spring look, which ended up being a pixie-bob cut of some sorts matching her bubbly personality beautifully.
Thursday, October 30, 2014
Friday, October 24, 2014
9: Dialectic Ideas
My idea for this dialect is to come to the conclusion that "Translation is not literal" through the use of video. I am thinking of portraying an American and a German conducting some type of interview. Through the discourse there will be difficulties in language barriers and context. I am trying to include some stereotypes that Americans may have of Germans and vice versa. I am definitely open to suggestions on this part. I've never made a video either, so this will be a challenge in itself for me.
I am still working out the details and the script, but I like this topic because I don't think people fully grasp this concept unless they've experienced it. As rhetors we always have to be careful not to do this when dealing with a global audience. I am always looking for constructive criticism, so please be open with your feedback.
I am still working out the details and the script, but I like this topic because I don't think people fully grasp this concept unless they've experienced it. As rhetors we always have to be careful not to do this when dealing with a global audience. I am always looking for constructive criticism, so please be open with your feedback.
Friday, October 17, 2014
8: ars dictamis... a few paragraphs
To Dr. Rice, by divine grace resplendent in Ciceronian Charm, Mira, inferior to his great knowledge and devoted learning, expresses obedient honorable service.
My passion for learning transcends into the thrill of teaching students what I have learned. Although my experience is limited to tutoring and Supplemental Instructor sessions at the Undergraduate level, this program would enable me to broaden my knowledge base and prepare me for a wider range of teaching.
Studying International Business introduced me to how culture impacts our relations with one another. Our interactions with different social classes, businesses, and economies are all influenced by differences and similarities in culture. Because of this, we have to adapt how we approach the entities of varying cultures. By studying Technical Communication, not only do I gain more insight into handling different audiences, but I can put the knowledge I already attain into practice.
To be a successful professor, a vast knowledge of the Technical Communication field must be known. This program offers this generalized experience and also presents areas of specialization. As mentioned before, my area of interest is the impact of culture or intercultural writing. Through this reputable program I wish to learn how to write, edit, and design cultural-specific marketing material.
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Your humble applicant,
Mira Allen
My passion for learning transcends into the thrill of teaching students what I have learned. Although my experience is limited to tutoring and Supplemental Instructor sessions at the Undergraduate level, this program would enable me to broaden my knowledge base and prepare me for a wider range of teaching.
Studying International Business introduced me to how culture impacts our relations with one another. Our interactions with different social classes, businesses, and economies are all influenced by differences and similarities in culture. Because of this, we have to adapt how we approach the entities of varying cultures. By studying Technical Communication, not only do I gain more insight into handling different audiences, but I can put the knowledge I already attain into practice.
To be a successful professor, a vast knowledge of the Technical Communication field must be known. This program offers this generalized experience and also presents areas of specialization. As mentioned before, my area of interest is the impact of culture or intercultural writing. Through this reputable program I wish to learn how to write, edit, and design cultural-specific marketing material.
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Your humble applicant,
Mira Allen
Thursday, October 9, 2014
7: Questions from India
What do you think of India?
Honestly, I don't know much about India. When I think of it, I think of a very crowded place that has people walking and riding bicycles everywhere. I think of a mixed culture full of vibrant colors and textures. A place of beautiful people and animals. Rich history, various religions, strong tradition and a large family structure also come to mind.
What's it like to be an American?
Being an American, I really appreciate the freedom that we have over our own life. Our career, religion, education, relationships, and lifestyle are all things we make decisions about everyday. Once we are 18, it's our life and we can go anywhere. Sometimes all of these life decisions become stressful, and it seems like we have too many options to choose from to make any kind of decision. Then the little things in life get forgotten and we take a lot of things for granted, until something happens and we get a reality check and remember how much our lives are blessed. After that, life doesn't seem as stressful and we are back on track with living our lives one decision at a time.
Is "home" related to identity? How?
I think "home" is definitely related to identity. As a child my family moved a lot. The only constant thing in my life is/was going to Germany to visit my Oma (grandma). Any time I think of "home" I think of Germany. It's a place I miss when I'm not there and yearn to go back to every year. Other things in my life constantly change, but my "home" doesn't change, it just evolves. For me, as a child, I wanted a sense of stability that I could come back to after being on all of my adventures. My dad was gone a lot for work and my mom instilled a lot of the German traditions in us. Part of my identity is the German side of me, even though I live in the U.S. Everyone seeks something out, and once they find it, it becomes part of their identity and part of their "home".
Can chaos in the home be productive?
Some people can only find sense when they're in the chaos. In this sense chaos in the home can be very productive. Sometimes chaos teaches people patience and the ability to let things go. Chaos can teach some very important life lessons that if taught in the home will help a person for the rest of their life.
What is my idea of homelessness?
The societal definition of homelessness in the U.S. is when someone is living out on the streets without a permanent structure to go to every night where one can eat, sleep, and bathe. I agree with this definition, but I also believe there is another version of homelessness, an emotional state. If someone is left feeling completely alone and abandoned, with no one to relate to or talk to, then this can be a sense of homelessness. They do not have a sense of belonging anywhere, or a support structure. These things usually come from the members of a "home," therefore not having them leaves someone "homeless".
What is the role of language in the "home"?
Language in the home is used to communicate discoveries, adventures, frustrations, opportunities, dreams, failures, thoughts, curiosities, criticisms, knowledge and feelings. Hopefully your "home" is a place where you feel comfortable sharing anything through the use of language.
What are five things which home means?
1. Family
2. Love
3. Security
4. Happiness
5. Discovery of oneself
Honestly, I don't know much about India. When I think of it, I think of a very crowded place that has people walking and riding bicycles everywhere. I think of a mixed culture full of vibrant colors and textures. A place of beautiful people and animals. Rich history, various religions, strong tradition and a large family structure also come to mind.
What's it like to be an American?
Being an American, I really appreciate the freedom that we have over our own life. Our career, religion, education, relationships, and lifestyle are all things we make decisions about everyday. Once we are 18, it's our life and we can go anywhere. Sometimes all of these life decisions become stressful, and it seems like we have too many options to choose from to make any kind of decision. Then the little things in life get forgotten and we take a lot of things for granted, until something happens and we get a reality check and remember how much our lives are blessed. After that, life doesn't seem as stressful and we are back on track with living our lives one decision at a time.
Is "home" related to identity? How?
I think "home" is definitely related to identity. As a child my family moved a lot. The only constant thing in my life is/was going to Germany to visit my Oma (grandma). Any time I think of "home" I think of Germany. It's a place I miss when I'm not there and yearn to go back to every year. Other things in my life constantly change, but my "home" doesn't change, it just evolves. For me, as a child, I wanted a sense of stability that I could come back to after being on all of my adventures. My dad was gone a lot for work and my mom instilled a lot of the German traditions in us. Part of my identity is the German side of me, even though I live in the U.S. Everyone seeks something out, and once they find it, it becomes part of their identity and part of their "home".
Can chaos in the home be productive?
Some people can only find sense when they're in the chaos. In this sense chaos in the home can be very productive. Sometimes chaos teaches people patience and the ability to let things go. Chaos can teach some very important life lessons that if taught in the home will help a person for the rest of their life.
What is my idea of homelessness?
The societal definition of homelessness in the U.S. is when someone is living out on the streets without a permanent structure to go to every night where one can eat, sleep, and bathe. I agree with this definition, but I also believe there is another version of homelessness, an emotional state. If someone is left feeling completely alone and abandoned, with no one to relate to or talk to, then this can be a sense of homelessness. They do not have a sense of belonging anywhere, or a support structure. These things usually come from the members of a "home," therefore not having them leaves someone "homeless".
What is the role of language in the "home"?
Language in the home is used to communicate discoveries, adventures, frustrations, opportunities, dreams, failures, thoughts, curiosities, criticisms, knowledge and feelings. Hopefully your "home" is a place where you feel comfortable sharing anything through the use of language.
What are five things which home means?
1. Family
2. Love
3. Security
4. Happiness
5. Discovery of oneself
Friday, October 3, 2014
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